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A beautifully told story with colorful characters out of epic tradition, a tight and complex plot, and solid pacing. -- Booklist, starred review of On the Razor's Edge

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Tuesday, December 30, 2014

Huzzah

Finished the draft of "The Journeyman: In the Great North Wood" (there was a title-change along the way). It weighs in at 44.1 kilowords and so might undergo an edit in second draft to take up the hem or tuck in a pleat. It has already had two subplots excised completely.

Today's excerpt:
Teo joined Sammi at the council fire. “Sammi,” he said, “I been thinking.”
“Sammi not interrupt stupid plainsman on splendid innovation.”
“Hunh?”
“Nothing. What thought hatched by strenuous clucking?”
“Well, we been talking about making a sortie that will probably result in all of us getting croaked…”
“Songworthy, right?”
“Yah, except who’s gonna sing it? Well the whole reason is we’re running out of food. Otherwise, we could all sit tight until the Raccoons go away.”
“Can sit tight other way, too. Starve to death, go into rigor.”

5 comments:

  1. I like Sammi! Now you’ve got me wanting to read this.

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  2. Wish to make Contact directly with Michael Flying re your Flynn blog and research
    My email is smarterfones@yahoo.ie

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  3. Should have read Michael Flynn and TOF Blog

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  4. Should have read Michael Flynn and TOF Blog

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  5. Wish to make Contact directly with Michael Flying re your Flynn blog and research
    My email is smarterfones@yahoo.ie

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