Apologia pro Blogpost Sua
This series, some of which date from 2012, and were excavated by paleogeologists from the shale formations of Kittatinny Ridge, have been modestly revised and arranged into the following order:
- It Came from Schenectady! [Where Do You Get Your Ideas?]
- Entitlement [How Do You Get Your Titles?]
- Another Fine Mess [Setting up the Story Problem]
- Getting Your Info Out of the Dumps [Providing the Supporting Material]
- Embodiment [Middles and Conclusions]
- Just One Dang Thing After Another [Plots]
- Who Was That Character I Saw You With Last Night? [Characters]
Some of these are based on short presentations made to the Writers Cafe of the Greater Lehigh Valley Writers Group, known as GLVWG, which is pronounced just as it’s spelled [and is probably a town in Wales]. Some are newly written. Materials in the various essays are cited from
- Block, Lawrence. Writing the Novel: From Plot to Print, (Writers Digest, 1979)
- Card, Orson Scott. Characters & Viewpoint (Writer's Digest Books, 1988)
- Gallishaw, John. Twenty Problems of the Fiction Writer, (Putnam, 1929)
- Heinlein, Robert A. "On the Writing of Speculative Fiction" in Of Worlds Beyond: The Science of Science Fiction Writing, A Symposium. ed. Lloyd Arthur Eshbach. Advent: Publishers Inc; 2nd edition (January 1, 1964) \
- Jericho Writers. 7 Different Ways to Plot a Novel. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hjo4rvINchg&t=9s
- Kress, Nancy. Beginnings, Middles and Ends. (F&W Media, 1993)
- Kress, Nancy. Characters, Emotion & Viewpoint: Techniques and Exercises for Crafting Dynamic Characters and Effective Viewpoints (Writers Digest Books, 2005)
- Meredith, Robert C. & John D. Fitzgerald, Structuring Your Novel: From basic idea to finished manuscript, (Barnes & Noble, 1972)
as well as others cited in passing. In addition, personal correspondence with several writers has been helpful, including with:
- Bill Gleason, then a neo-pro with several short stories in Analog
- Nancy Kress, multiple Hugo and Nebula winning author and one-time fiction columnist for Writer's Digest
- Geoff Landis, author of Crossing Mars and winner of both Hugo and Nebula awards for short fiction.
- Ed Lerner, author of multiple novels including the Fleet of Worlds series co-authored with Larry Niven
- Jack McDevitt, Nebula-winning author of the popular Alex Benedict and Priscilla Hutchens novels
- Larry Niven, award winning author of Ringworld, and other novels, numerous short fiction, and several collaborations [Lucifer's Hammer, et al.] with the late Dr Dr Jerry Pournelle and others.
- Dr Stan Schmidt, retired editor of Analog magazine and the author of Argonaut, Lifeboat Earth, and other novels.
- Michael Swanwick, author of the Nebula-winning Stations of the Tide and fine short fiction
- Harry Turtledove, the master of alternate history, has won the Hugo and Nebula for his short fiction
- Juliette Wade, then a neo-pro with several notable short stories hinging on linguistics and culture.
- John C. Wright, author of the Golden Age series, Chronicles of Chaos, and Count to a Trillion
Anatomy of a Story
A story has four main structural dimensions:
- Theme: what the Story is About.
- Setting: the milieu in which the Story takes place; i.e., time, place, atmosphere, etc. Also called Worldbuilding.
- Characters: the People who act out the Story.
- Plot: the events through which the story is acted .
These dimensions are independent of one another. You can have an exciting plot featuring cardboard characters or vivid characters in a ho-hum plot. Nancy Kress once said of a national best-seller that the characters had all the depth of wallpaper -- but she could not stop turning the pages. The best fiction hits on all scales: rounded characters in an intriguing plot in a vivid setting. If in addition the fiction has a captivating Theme/Idea, you hit the quadrafecta.
When TOF showed the Story Cube to Nancy Kress many years ago, she suggested Wordsmithing as a fifth dimension. It is certainly an excellence or perfection of a story, and inseparable from it. You cannot tell a story but in words.* But it is of a different order than the four just mentioned.
(*Yeah, graphic "novels", comic books, movies, et al. in our wonderful new world of visual rather than logical entertainment. But even these oft need scripts or story boards.)
The arrangement of the words is the Form, as in Aristotelian hylemorphism, while the content of the story is the Matter (let's call it the "subject matter"). Matter (hyle) is pure potential; Form (morphe) makes it real. Imagine Don Quixote written in the Form of a travelogue or as by Ernest Hemingway. It would not be the same book!
There is no answer to boredom. -- Katherine Fullerton Gerould
Gallishaw's Laws of Interest.
When you have shot and killed a man you have in some measure clarified your attitude toward him. You have given a definite answer to a definite problem. For better or worse you have acted decisively. In a way, the next move is up to him.-- "Golden Gate," Golden Gate and Other Stories (1982)
Coming Soon: It Came from Schenectady!